Māui and the great fish

one day Māui when out on a fishing trip Māui was right in the sea.But Māui's brothers would always make an excuse so Māui  when by him saftey Māui like fishing he was there for a long time it look like the hole day and it look it was a long day out of fishing and it look like a good time in the sea the hoke was in the sea for 30 minutes.At five o’clock but he can not get a fish he has been out in the sea for ever he was mad.’’I have come to fish because muri ranga whenua said i would be a great fisherman . Let your lines down as i say my karakia and you’ll catch more fish than you have.’’ Māui began his karakia.

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Writing : Narrative Legends.

Writing  Narrative Legends	I need help to write  a narrative legend.	I can write a narrative legend if I am guided.	I can use some structures of a narrative (beginning, middle, end, setting, characters, plot) I can use some descriptive words to describe characters, setting and events.	I can use the structures of a narrative (beginning, middle, end, setting, characters, plot) I use a range of descriptive words to describe characters, settings and events. I use a range of simple, compound and complex sentences.   I can organise my ideas into paragraphs. I can check that each sentence is complete and makes sense.	I can use the structures of a narrative (beginning, middle, end, setting, characters, plot) I use a range of descriptive words and details to describe characters, settings and events.  Using figurative language to help develop connection with the audience. I deliberately use a range of simple, compound and complex sentences to set the mood of my writing.   I can organise my ideas into paragraphs. I can check that each sentence is complete and makes sense. I seek feedback on how to improve my writing.